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Vogue India.   Spot Mine

                                                        

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Hi Laiyla,

 

This is seriously impressive – well done! It’s a great example of placing your cover alongside real examples and yours looks right at home so clearly meeting professional standards. There are just a few things to consider going forward:

 

• The image is very strong but also quite busy for a cover image in terms of background. Notice the other (professional) front covers you have posted tended either to be studio shots or have less in the background in the upper parts of the image. 
• This is getting super picky but the spacing of the text for your main cover line is not quite professional – both horizontally and vertically. 
• There are very few cover lines on there. This is accurate for Vogue India as all the examples you have posted have the same approach you have taken. However, AQA briefs tend to have annoying minimum requirements like ‘at least 5 cover lines’ so perhaps do a Vogue UK cover as an extension task with additional cover lines on it?

worked on :   couldnt decide where to place the text so i made 2